some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many hold the view that teaching together can be beneficial to all the children of various abilities. However, there is a body of opinion which claims that talented students should be educated separately and receive special treatment. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate and give my opinion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that indiscriminate education can improve low-scoring students’ academic performance. This is because they can be encouraged by other high leveled peers, becoming more industrious. In addition, students with better attainments would foster altruism as they would realize the importance of help others. For example, teachers usually ask intelligent students help their classmates who have trouble in study. Once a child has experienced the sense of achievement after giving assistant to low-scoring students, he is more likely to help others in the future.
On the other hand, nonetheless, intelligent students will acquire more knowledge from special trainings for them. Compared with normal students, their courses contain more exercises and complex knowledge, having more benefits to enlarge children’s horizon and improve their abilities. Furthermore, normal students will face less pressure if they have classes without intelligent ones. They do not need to finish assignments beyond their abilities which are generally prepared for smart students. Thus, different children can obtain different teaching methods suit for them, which improves the efficiency of education.
To summarize, there is no doubt that indiscriminate teaching will help shorten the gap between students. At the same time, nevertheless, classified teaching would be more suitable for various groups. In the final analysis, I think schools should have freedom to choose teaching methods based on their situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, thus, for example, i think, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76086956522 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95475401828 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6519176892 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217888858349 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699627021 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617491411803 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142321115711 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975486110703 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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