Some people believe that allowing children make their own choices on everyday matters( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of own decision by children which was always debatable has now becoming more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opini Both proposition appears to be more rational. This essay willing further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that it is necessary for teenagers to make their decision by themselves as it can help them to tackle with problems by themselves .another striking benefit in this regard is that it also helps to grow mental strength by judgment of things and put pressure on their mind to solve something like as, in study if nobody helps them to solve their problem then they will not hope on anyone and get solutions of this problem themselves, that’s why it is good for them. Categorically discussing, it can not be ignored that the main reason behind this is that youngsters can built their confidence level if they are dependent on their own choices but if they are not self dependent so they will afraid to take any decision therefore,own decision is crucial for success.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying decisions stems from the fact is that they are not well mature so they do not know abou Their good or bad so parents backup is necessary for them to achieve goals. Moving further, it is pertinent to mentioned that parents can help them well as compare with their own preference because they have experience to deal with problems. Moreover, totally depend on themselves is not good as they do not have ability to judge good and bad person so they can join in bad community whose are harmful for them that’s why parents control is also important for children. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are against of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to conclusion that the benefits of own decision by teenagers are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89736842105 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64483372433 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.01265037 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.181818182 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5454545455 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115615083365 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446053926531 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460355525274 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684988968492 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265046242099 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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