Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era, transportation system is an integral part of the society. Many people argue that authorities should consume vast amount of money on government funded vehicles while others believe that they spend huge chunk on different aspects like cost reduction and protect the environment. This essay will discuss both views before reaching any conclusion
To begin with, transport system is back bone of the every nation, several messes useing public transport to hit their destination. For example, in some regions majority of folks prefer to travel through public transportation because they do not have any alternative mode of the transportation. Thus it is important the transportation system works well and help to every passenger to reach their point on proper time,it requires money . Moreover if people reached their office on time and they earn more money as well as also improve quality of the work. To made life easier government should spend money on transportation system
On the other hand, turning to other argument government should utilize fund's on other aspects such as cost reduction of the transportation fare so every individual using this mode. For instance, if government should spend money on cost reduction it also solve so many problems like many people prefer public transport rather than their own vehicle and this step help to protect the environment. Undeniable, government spend money on cost reduction, it also help to many people
In conclusion, consume money on dropped their fare help to people who are traveling through public transportation system and it also save their environment. I personally believe that if cost reduction help to improve environment conditions directly or indirectly, then government spend money on cost reduction
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
...alternative mode of the transportation. Thus it is important the transportation syst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45551601423 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02665962365 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523131672598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2970161944 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.3 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151069157799 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666883068721 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041783350755 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102892621029 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253791282751 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.