Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you a
From the past to today, people around the world, from old to young, have their freedom on what they want to entertain, especially in children. However, some people believe that if children do not do the educational activities in their free time, they are waste of time. Personally, I totally disagree with this notion.
There are 2 reasons explain why this statement is false. Firstly, in modern life, teenagers have to study a lot, from learning at school to doing homework at home, so that they just have a little time to relax after a hard school-day, such as listen to music, play games. if the parents think these activities are unnecessary and prohibited their son from them, it will give bad emotions and more pressure to the teenagers. Secondly, infants who have beautiful and bright souls are excited to explore many things around the world. The prevention of the adults can limit the growth of the children. Moreover, this child can become isolated and start to avoid communicating with another one. it is very dangerous and can cause many problems for the future of these infants. For instance, in 2000, some professors of Havard University found out that the child who can enjoy their hobbies and do a lot of leisure activities in their free time seem to be more intelligent than the ones who just following the parental desire, do some educational activities.
In conclusion, the children must be done what they want in their free time to encourage their development and help them have potentially free time. The parents just need to guide them to avoid harmful activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86346863469 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58208206269 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7628354233 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290495110123 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090546996335 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148021501006 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21877283677 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985311348296 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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