Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. In what ways are computers a hindrance?
The widespread use of technology has benefited humanity in multifarious ways and computers have become the mainstay. Some people appreciate the efficient use of computers while others disregard them as a tool that causes trouble for people. The benefits of computers are plenty but this essay argues that they cause health problems and addictions.
In today's time, many people are seen sitting in front of their desktops or laptops for a prolonged duration. Office workers are the most affected as they are inundated by assignments and paper works that they are forced to sit extra long hours in the pursuit of finishing the task. Such people without any physical activity are doomed to be subjected to severe health ailments like joint pains, diabetes and the like. This is one of the ways where computers create health issues.
Children these days tend to surf the net a lot most of the time. If left unchecked, they may go through the various questionable websites that can deviate them from their studies. For example, if children are given the freedom to use the laptop according to his freedom, there are high chances for them to bump into contents that are very vile and this, in turn, can make them addicts resulting in the poor performance in academics. Hence, computers sway children from their academic purpose.
In conclusion, computers are very helpful for humankind but they have negative impacts on people. These gadgets are detrimental to health and also makes children computer addicts. Therefore, people must make suitable screentime and not fall prey to their clutches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09923664122 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53618989675 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9933356568 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244598380791 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805728313316 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472273599492 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147825427608 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508265909189 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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