Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams always succeed in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Many people consider that prevail in some competition is depend on power of each players, while others oppose that being winner in some sport should be have strong mental. In this essay, I will examine both of viewpoints with my own idea.
Firstly, indeed true if athletes have requirement to kept their body for always robust. In other words, strenght of them can encourage their activities and have stability of endurance, this condition will advantage for the team. For instance, announcement for all football athletes should be height and strong body because they are will kept their field for always safe and not attack from foes. So, body iron will be helping to complete the game and open the door towards champion.
On the other hand, mental of someone capable to changing situations. When mental of someone interfered that can make damage in the competition, as a result the team will be looser, however, instead of mental disruptive, mental that derived from intelligence is the most important to invent big successful in tournament. As illustration, chess games not need big body or strong body, each athlete only focus on chess table and concentrate to creating some strategy, thereby they will beat the enemy. Thus, the best way being a winner is from brain and how they make methods to make it clear.
To conclude, although body is most crucial to athlete and mental of someone also give effect for some competion, however, in my opinion, combination of two this things is perfect to taking steps in tournament.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Message: Did you mean 'had'?
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Message: Did you mean ''?
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Message: Did you mean 'keep' or 'be kept'?
Suggestion: keep; be kept
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Suggestion: gives
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94941634241 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55644096196 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2810925497 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150776731148 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562224163785 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542872493201 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997895573316 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517207915175 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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