Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. In my opinion, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and therefore I disagree the statement that hobbies should be difficult in order to enjoyable.
On the one hand, there is no denying that difficult hobbies are sometimes more exciting. A huge sense of success would be gained by people if they accomplish an extremely difficult activity. For example, that racing a car in dramatically high speed is difficult and dangerous for most of us, while we might feel great sense of proud and satisfactory when we race faster than others. In addition, the difficult hobbies can arise our enthusiastic to solve the problems which hinder us to achieve our goals. Understandably, many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level.
On the other hand, the hobbies which is easy to achieve are also enjoyed by many people. Nowadays, with the increasingly busy life, there are few spare times for people to spend on their hobbies. People can relax themselves in short time when they enjoy a relatively easy hobby. Moreover, those hobbies require less equipment, it is simple to learn and it is inexpensive. I remember that when I was a child I can not afford any toys without enough money, playing simple games with friends was the only leisure activity for me, while the extremely easy hobby gives me not only a great fun but also a fantastic memory.
In conclusion, difficult hobbies can be can be exciting, but simple hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.
- The table shows the maximum minimum and average monthly salaries in a European country in five employment sector in 2009 74
- Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness? 61
- We have three important parts of education: reading, writing and math. Some people think every child will benefit from a fourth skill added to the list: computer skills. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- In multicultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together. Do you think the advantages of multicultural societies outweigh the disadvantages ? 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'can be'.
Suggestion: can be
...ry. In conclusion, difficult hobbies can be can be exciting, but simple hobbies can be equ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68502235851 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578358208955 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1884859434 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259215476931 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953253317922 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976100356695 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196540730579 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107260195773 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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