Nowadays there are a lot of types of hobbies, some of them are relatively easy but other hobbies seem a bit of challenge. In my opinion, I’m totally disagree with people, who believe that our hobbies should need to be more difficult for us to enjoy.
First of all, we don’t really need to make our recreational activities to be more difficult to make it be an interesting hobby. There are a ton of hobbies in the world and those hobbies are still very enjoyable even though it is not hard or risky for leisure pursuits. On the other hand, when you force yourself to find a challenging leisure activity, it may be makes you fell bored and exhausted in the long run.
At the same time, a difficult hobby is not always a best choice, more challenges also make you feel more stressed and bored to deal with these activity. In contrast, a hobby which you can easy pursuit is not bad at all, not hard to find out a hobby that you interested in. basketball, football or some extreme sports for instant. Those sports are very enjoyable until some people turn it into a match and force themselves to win, at that time I don’t think it will be interesting anymore.
In conclusion, more challenging hobbies will help people keep practice and work hard day in day out to be better and it will be enjoyable for some people, in my opinion not only difficult leisure activities are interesting but some easy pursuit hobbies are also the best thing to unwind and to get into that hobby.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e time, a difficult hobby is not always a best choice, more challenges also make ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
...el more stressed and bored to deal with these activity. In contrast, a hobby which you can eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, still, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54275092937 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5324690488 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9823361935 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319831379915 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127885312002 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635890278392 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214908821701 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193949525101 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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