Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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...if this is a bad situation. For instance , a manager who always works hard and exa...
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...ty to promote his position. Nevertheless , he feels quite tired and exhausted so h...
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...ance perhaps he will feel happy and mary , because this is not his niche . All in...
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...nd mary , because this is not his niche . All in all his efforts are meaningless....
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...ll his efforts are meaningless. this is a evident explains why some people accept...
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...ad circumstance without hesitation Beside that , other people argue it is b...
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...e without hesitation Beside that , other people argue it is better to impr...
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...ter to improve such situation. Generally , it is not hard to understand this opini...
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...t is not hard to understand this opinion . Most of people fond of living in a good...
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... this requirement they have to try a lot . To achieve success is immesely difficul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73441108545 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70954530396 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484988452656 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9380704881 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4333333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 70.0 5.01903807615 1395% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263580979895 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576172453128 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905116839846 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158431756215 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135226709674 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.