Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
When it comes to unfortunate predicaments, some people choose to accept them, while others decide to find their way out. Although accepting what fate brings is an understandable choice, I agree with those who choose otherwise.
Often, people would give up because they feel that the life-changing decision does not lie within their hands but another’s. Take finding jobs for instance. An applicant would most likely experience the feeling of being useless after being turned down. To relieve it, they resort to believing it is a greater being that arranged such a situation, and therefore, no longer experience such a negative feeling. However, the drawback is clear. He or she still suffers from the situation, which, in this example, is having no chance of advancement in pursuing their career.
Being in the same situation, the other group would put their feelings aside and send more applications, because they understand that trying hard results in satisfying outcomes. By denying their limitations and moving forward, these people might end up in a good scenario among the endless possibilities. Thus, if a greater being who makes the arrangements exists, there is no proof confirming the situation that one is facing is the ultimate ending he or she deserves. Failure might be a stepping stone one must have, and after a lot of it, one may get to a triumphant victory.
The bottom line is, although life seems frustrating sometimes, accepting what one has because it’s been set up makes no improvement, but doing something will. The more people have this positive mindset, the more will be satisfied with their situations.
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- Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76669477482 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643939393939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9790928511 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12966415664 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441605524535 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325646970156 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748392358915 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034608557665 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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