Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization’s success, while others think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With regard to the pace of alterations in the way corporations make profits, it is thought managers should undertake to lead the enterprise to feasible success they will gain, whilst it is countered by the notion that other elements could be more important. To achieve an evident picture, it is of necessity to put this matter into a broader context.
On the one hand, it might be perceived that managers are the linchpin of any development and success the company will obtain. They could intend and present game plans, leading the company to be the head of the game, delivering a multitude of benefits for both employees and shareholders. For example, being between a rock and hard place, the company would find a way out of it by pursuing its managers. Consequently, the company that is like a ship can move forward with all its crews through rough seas. For this reason, the role of managers in achieving potential success has been garnered by some.
Another way of looking at being successful is that there are a variety of factors that can act as a catalyst for acquiring success. What is believed is that motivated, industrious, and above all decisive employees have a largely effective role to play in bringing a great number of benefits to the company, so much so that the company can be geared up to face and cope with difficulties, notably some of which are placed in winning a contract. In other words, these individuals are to any company what pillars are to buildings. By all accounts, advocates of this mindset also claim that a competitive environment can be worthwhile, helping the company land on its feet. For example, promotions and bonuses can be considered as a key to shaping a competitive environment which compels all employees to struggle, so that their efforts are aligned with the company’s strategies. These factors, therefore, cannot be naively ignored.
On balance, seemingly useful as managers might be, there are other elements amongst which dedicated employees as well as a competitive environment are the bedrock of any thriving company. Indeed, under no circumstances should we lose sight of the fact that these elements overshadow the progress the company will make.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9972972973 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.860916453 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2636603226 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124258949853 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464605052276 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408004607997 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740328697845 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371763378357 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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