Some people believe that movies should be based on social stigma while others believe that movies should be based on real life heroes
To embark with there are some people who believe that movies should be based on social stigma because through them awareness can be brought among people about social issues and their perception can be changed movie dangal is suited epitome in this movie issue of gender inequality is highlighted and also showed a father supporting his daughters to become wrestlers regardless people opinions about girls this film taught people lesson that girls should be raised like boys
on the contrary side there are some people who believe that movies should be based on real life legends as they motivate others and we get to know about their life incidents there are manifold visions directed on real life heroes such as punjabi movie subedar joginder singh this movie is based on indo_Chinese war during the war he was left alone in battlefield and due to his courage he faced all circumstances and sacrificed his life and family for others protection through this movie many people came to know about subedar joginder Singh
Lastly it is clear that both section of movies; social stigma and real life heroes are prominent for society development
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33083689604 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 191.0 20.2975951904 941% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 955.0 106.682146367 895% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 191.0 20.7667163134 920% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 46.0 7.06120827912 651% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526211474308 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.526211474308 0.084324248473 624% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312175420915 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11881720373 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 97.6 13.0946893788 745% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -122.39 50.2224549098 -244% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.8 11.3001002004 688% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.91 8.58950901804 197% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 78.4 10.1190380762 775% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 78.0 10.7795591182 724% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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