Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Recently, the phenomenon of choices in today’s modern life and its corresponding impacts have triggered a massive dispute. In this regard, some people are of the opinion that individuals can select amongst tremendous options, although others believe that today’s too various choices are not necessary. In my view, modern lifestyle provides us with opportunities to select among far more options in comparison with the past.
Obviously, people couldn’t avoid of many different selections in their everyday life. Peaking up which restaurant to have dinner, making decisions about the costumes to wear in formal meetings or casual events, and preferring which physical activities to carry out regarding fitness and being healthy are samples of the ocean of choices we have.
Moreover, there are miscellaneous selections in face of individuals by which choosing each one, it is likely to change the whole future life themselves, and even the consequences of their selection could affect the entire globe or the environment. For instance, deciding to pursue higher education in medicine rather that physics will amend our way in years to come. At the global scale, developing inappropriate agricultural practices by the authorities of the world’s nations may lead to such concerns as soil erosion or acceleration of sea-level rising.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of other’s insights. They state that humanity does not need such too many choices. Meanwhile, individuals involve themselves in matters and options in their life which are not noteworthy. In the past days, sons followed their father with respect to careers or parents decided about the marriage of their daughters. Consequently, various troubles which people are struggling to conquer them nowadays, people who lived in previous centuries even were not aware of them.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on too many choices nowadays, I opt to support the idea that having too many choices paves the way to breathtaking progresses in human life. I am pondering about could Armstrong and his colleagues make space travel and walk on the moon if they had to select their fathers’ jobs?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t. Obviously, people couldn’t avoid of many different selections in their everyday life. Peak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in my view, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3527696793 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86721316873 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63556851312 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7561646187 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196540769085 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598963189466 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616338382336 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108708381223 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628151996413 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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