Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that there are a huge number of choices for us in today’s society. I concur with this statement by the following explanations.
It is undeniable that the explosion of merchandises has led people to face an overwhelming number of options. In the world that has become a big place with consumerism, tons of commodities, which are produced by the number of suppliers, are being launched to the market with the purpose of satisfying people’s increasing demands. There are countless consumer products and services which cause people to be confused when making a decision about what to purchase and or even where to go shopping. Today, the number of items in each grocery store is around 50,000 choices, and this is likely to lead us to stand in front of a similarly outsize wealth of options.
Apart from the overwhelming consumer choices expressed above, there is another factor should be discussed. The emergence of the Internet is one of the elements helping us access contributing to the endless alternatives for the latest recreation activities such as movies or music. These genres are constantly updated which creates a dramatic expansion in choices for our hobbies nowadays. Furthermore, the Internet not only provides us more entertainment options but also helps us have more intelligent alternatives for consumer goods due to more clear information. E-commerce, for instance, is leading people to increase the number of intelligent consumer choices due to the transparency of merchandises’ origin.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I firmly hold the view that there is plenty of alternatives for people to make decisions these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, similarly, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13732182638 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6380505349 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990187132894 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409564721614 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478406253869 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066330900549 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411104143253 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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