Everyone has own presciption about imagination. Some people think that, reading a book is a better option for creation of images. Others, thinks that TV is the more advancement technology and it can help better for learn new languages and skills. In my opines, I agree that book is helpful for every aspect of life whether, it is language or skills.
On the first hand, i strongly beleive that, book is ,a true friend of human. If you want to explore yourself. So, you should read book. Whatever, it is a history, documentary, or stories. I read some where, if you become true human being you find yourself in books. Furthermore, book is a basic foundation of language and skills. For example, when a children start their career. So, book is the first pillar of him because they learn and write on it. Even books always stay with you when you are child or after that when you are old.
On the other side, when author want to introduce his idea. So, firstly they write his story on book. After that they visualize his idea on screen and TV. For instances, Herry Portor is a most famous novel in all over the world. However, Everyone knows that, it was famous because they was established on book. After that they played on Television.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, book is more effective resource and everyone can easily learn it whether it is language or skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57831325301 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41483375698 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5595430636 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.0 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.45 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191985971817 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567646980979 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528285070494 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11454109293 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537207840206 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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