Some people believe that people who read books for pleasure can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is not doubt that there are a variety of entertainments for people nowadays, some people think that reading books have helped bring positive changes than watching TV in aspects of imagination and language.
I personally believe that reading books could bring about lot of benefits for people not just limit at developing more the skills of imagination and language. Firstly, the habit of reading can help people to foster patience which is very much become useful later in their life. Because when the encountering emergencies such as diseases or accidents, those people who is the patience could tackle these kinds of problems better comparatively. Also, it is admitted that a kid who has read books persistently from earliest hours has indeed more vocabularies and fancy ideas than the peer who did not. Through reading books, such as the literature, the science and so on, kids are willing to focus on their energy into some chapters or questions that obsess themselves, meanwhile their brain is exercised.
On the other hand, we should not ignore the positive effects of watching TV, which has its unique advantages --- visual and sound. For an infant or a little baby under 3, it is impossible that they are getting to family with this world through books. For example, a singing bird skims a blue river on a television screen, which attract baby’s attention tightly. The kid is prone to imitate the song and image what is the bird. Therefore, watching television is also an efficient approach to sharpen their essential skills.
In conclusion, I think that whether people to watch TV or read books, just finding the right way can bring beneficial results.
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...t a kid who has read books persistently from earliest hours has indeed more vocabularies and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03237410072 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6421192598 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.562366247 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3524789243 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109492558383 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905583809181 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202931802659 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959391179853 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.