Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what do you extent agree or disagree?
While many people believe that the time spends on planning for future is unnecessary and to be concentrating on the present is more crucial, I argue that the paths we created for our future assets what makes our present days meaningful. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with this notion.
Firstly, individuals usually set goals to bring contentment in their life and they are focusing in their current moment to achieve them. Although obscurity causes major stress and negative thinking, having a target will help people to find meaning in their lives. For instance, senior high school students, which not decided on their career will struggle when making application to the colleges. This is because it will be too late when they realize the department they want to apply are way higher than their notes. Therefore, future planning should be taken to the account to be aware of opportunities, which otherwise people have missed.
Furthermore, living in the moment may cause failure in every area of life and not always financially, socially too. In other words, relationships are improving by effort and to make things move further, like having a family, children, etc. Not worrying about what is next is won’t be enough. For instance, parents are just one of the people can’t have this living in the moment motto in their life. Even for providing an average life for their child, they need to consider their incomes and outcomes carefully and hence usually they have to make savings.
In conclusion, despite the freedom that provides by living in the current moment, people should pay attention their future plans to live a comfortable life because time is running fast and future is not that far away
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47687861272 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49571954715 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1190442759 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286163584524 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876880511738 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504929168083 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167460851445 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322691735589 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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