Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
People's opinions are divided whether it is compulsory for certain occupations, including doctors and engineers, to dedicate their work in the country where training sessions are provided or individuals in these fields are given free choice to be employed, regardless of the locations. Personally, I totally concur with the latter statement.
For a variety of reasons, it would be unjustifiable to force people working in medical and engineering fields to exert their time and effort in one particular nation. To begin with, as the world has become a global village, the vast majority of programmes related to popular areas, such as medical and engineering majors, can be commonly found in a great number of universities, located in both developed and developing nations. Hence, as long as learners are financially qualified, they should be given an option to choose the destination in which they are widen their knowledge. As a result, due to the fact that these are financially independent from any organisations, it is understandable if they choose to start their career in a foreign country as they may look for an opportunity to achieve a new income, which is somehow unachievable in their motherland.
Apart from the abovementioned practical reasons, a group of people hold a belief that doctors or engineers need to devote their effort in the country where they are trained. To explain, in order to avoid brain drain and retain well - qualified individuals, some governments sponsor these learners in hope of creating a skilful workforce for the labour market. In return, commitment is required as these future employees are required to work for their own motherland. Taking Vietnam as an example. Those who possess outstanding academic performance are often provided scholarship or specific training sessions from the government. However, it is compulsory for them to be employed once they finish their formal education or training time.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that despite where people conduct their training programmes, it is advisable for them to opt for the destination in their career path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...hoose the destination in which they are widen their knowledge. As a result, due to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, so, well, apart from, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34705882353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05525125747 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3064293812 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.846153846 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340587587638 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107683550128 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762706257949 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191820218854 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741977018584 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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