Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary settings, some professionals including doctors, lawyers and engineers are granted higher wages than those average employees. In this essay, I will discuss why their higher earnings are reasonable and what kind of occupation should be offered higher salaries.
There are several lines of evidence justifying the higher earnings of these professionals. To commence with, in order to work as a doctor or engineer, one needs post graduate or doctoral degrees that can only be obtained after several years of study. In addition, people’ earnings should be based on their contribution to the whole society. Doctors’ work plays crucial roles in maintaining individuals’ health, and lawyers make sure that people get justice, while civil engineers design houses, shopping malls, bridges and so on.
Having said that, there are several other professionals who deserve higher salaries. In my opinion, scientists deserve higher salaries, since the vast majority of people are beneficiaries of the development of science. To be more specific, it is medical scientists’ continuous dedication that contributes to the enhancement of medical development. Consequently, those previously incurable diseases can be cured, and humans’ life expectations have been prolonged. Besides, it is agricultural scientists’ contribution that increases the output of food, and thus eliminates the threat of malnutrition and food shortage. Soldiers and cops also deserve higher salaries because without them we cannot live safely.
In conclusion, the fact that some professionals earn more than others is justified. In my opinion, salaries should be commensurate with the skills and experience required to perform a job and the contribution they make to the society. Hence, I believe that scientists also need to be paid more.
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- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
- The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68613138686 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13384450883 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3169773464 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230269520613 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698401132677 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509627013923 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140955439374 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630548377437 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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