Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are several reasons why people argue that doctors and engineers should work in their own countries. I would agree with the idea that they should have the right to work in wherever they want.
It is clear that there are various benefits if people trained in special professionals work for their facilities or their country. Firstly, it would be easy for them to adapt in working environment as they used to experience the internship or conduct their experiments in those places. For example, a student who comes from another place or another country will be difficult to familiar with new environment and new cultures so it might affect to their performance. In the contrast, local engineers or doctors will work effectively and learn the rope quickly. Another thing that should be considered is that these professionals are important jobs in a nation so that they should give their experiences and skills to support society before going abroad or doing something else. Governments in some countries might subside for university to train these majors so they should work in their country.
On the other hand, people who do the jobs related to technology or medicine should be free to work in another country if they wish. One of the most primary reasons is these jobs need to approach the latest innovations, the state-of-the-art technologies. Therefore, they should be encouraged to work in the developed countries to improve their skills. It would be good for both government and themselves. Moreover, it is hard and almost impossible to force someone only work in a particular place. For example, in some countries, there is a policy to required employees have to work for a company in a specific time, but they will be free after this period, they completely work wherever they want.
In conclusion, although professionals should be encouraged to serve for their country where they did their training. I believe that those people should be free to choose where they work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red employees have to work for a company in a specific time, but they will be fre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, another thing, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01818181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77760954495 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493939393939 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0024413385 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.596118713395 0.244688304435 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218769624563 0.084324248473 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128264743208 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.413928384891 0.151304729494 274% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838099388698 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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