Some people believe that reading the newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that the more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that technology has changed our world and make people’s life convenient. Some traditional things are disappearing, newspapers are one of them.
People are increasingly feel grateful for the convenience which brought by science and technology. After TV had been invented, one can choose watch TV to get informed of the latest news. People can only read with words and picture with newspapers. However with TV, audiences can enjoy sounds and moving images and therefore they are given more detail and accurate information. Nowadays, many youngsters like to surf on the internet to read news. The internet can deliver information even faster than TV, and it also easy to update the news if has some mistakes. Network can provide instantaneous information, saving the time of printing and publishing, so the readers can follow up the latest news.
However, the advocators of newspaper believe that newspaper publish system has stricter censorship, which can ensure the authenticity of the report. Many people believe that they can get more reliable news from printed media than internet. Also, newspapers is the best choice for elder people who could not use computer as good as young people. Finally, some readers feel worried about reading fake news from internet, since anyone can distribute news on the internet without censorship.
Overall, it is true that the influence of newspaper has decreased in human life. But I believe it will continuously exist, not in paper but on internet. Some newspapers have begun to open online mode. And it is a good choice for people to get reliable news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to watch'
Suggestion: to watch
...er TV had been invented, one can choose watch TV to get informed of the latest news. ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...with words and picture with newspapers. However with TV, audiences can enjoy sounds and...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, therefore, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15648854962 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7546571274 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3178091255 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190099001766 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652831817348 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377851855071 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123667273653 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554437023619 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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