Some people believe that teachers have an important role to play in the educational success, while others think it is the attitude of students that matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the age of modernization, significant shifts have been made to the education, most notable of which is the part a teacher plays. Therefore, much discussion has arisen over what the main contributing factor to academic success is. While some highlights the valuable guidance of a good teacher, others attribute it to the capabilities and determination of a student. It is believed that students are the ones with the most control over their own performance even though good consultancy from teachers is undoubtedly irreplaceable.
First, the value of students’ hard work and perseverance needs to be emphasized. Indeed, the results of an academic work depend heavily on the efforts of the learners. Because they are the ones responsible for their work and the only ones who can conduct that work, they are required to perform to the best of their abilities. In the early phase, they may study out of pressure from parents or authorities, yet they can only succeed should they push themselves beyond their limits without being told to. The more passive a student is, the less likely they are to achieve their goals, regardless of the resources provided to them. For example, even if a student is to be admitted to the top schools with expert teachers in their respective fields, they have little prospect of actually graduating without the maximum effort.
In contrast, the extent of academic achievements to which a student receive depends not only on themselves but also the quality of their education environment. Clearly, there is a noticeable division among educational institutes and with it a noticeable difference in the competence of lecturers. A qualified teacher must be an authority on their subjects as well as be an inspiring individual, especially for the lower education levels. It is necessary that they discover a student’s true interest and encourage the student to pursue their dreams. Thus, whether a student can advance their academic study or not is determined by the orientation and instruction provided to them. Helpfulness from teachers allows students to realize their ambitions much quicker and with fewer obstacles along the way.
All things considered, educational success consists of a variety of factors, yet the most important one belongs to the students themselves. Nevertheless, teachers and educators are well-advised to assist these students in their path as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27835051546 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03129161854 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548969072165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.172528428 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173448390636 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620955759784 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430906958255 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126131597235 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502764463051 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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