It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing attention to the manner judging offender. In fact, there are some who hold firmly their belief that it is better to fix punishments for different type of crime. However, others argue convincingly that the chastisements for each law-breaker should be accomplished depending on the the situation of a specific crime, and advance motivation for doing it. Therefore, some major oints will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are two primary points for people to defend the former argument. First of all, it is a well documented fact that if the governments accredit the particular rules for each offense, everyone will be easily conscious how they will be punished. As the result, it can be partly attributed to decrease the crime rate. Furthermore, there is no doubt that fixed punishments are fair justice systems in which sombody is the same. The most obvious example to prove is that it would be easier for the court to administer the law without considering the crime's motivation.
On the other hand, there are two main evidences for other to support the latter argument. First and foremost, it is commly excepted that taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite to have a more huma . A clear example being found to prove is that stealing in order to assist family admit difficult economy situation will result in a somehow lower sentence than stealing for personal profit. Equally important, there is no denying that in many cases, the minor one commit because they are inexperienced. It is essential to understand the sin's resons, reducing in sentences as well as having a more suitable education system to children.
In conclusion, it is my strong belief that certain punishment is the best way to have potantial impact in preventing citizens commiting. Accordingly, i highly recommend that the goverment should enhance people's awareness in terms of the importances of children's instruction. If this recommendation is carried out , the comprehensive development of our society will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ker should be accomplished depending on the the situation of a specific crime, and adva...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ker should be accomplished depending on the the situation of a specific crime, and adva...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he most obvious example to prove is that it would be easier for the court to admi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crimes'' or 'crime's'?
Suggestion: crimes'; crime's
...inister the law without considering the crimes motivation. On the other hand, there...
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: Equally,
...ence than stealing for personal profit. Equally important, there is no denying that in ...
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Suggestion: ,
...n. If this recommendation is carried out , the comprehensive development of our so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as, first of all, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10451977401 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96532771818 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590395480226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9444977766 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379233692534 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998800239246 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751915751067 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21364879355 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10166538177 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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