Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are always be two sides of view to determine the wise judgment of law-breaker. From a conservative view may suggest that punishment should be conducted in fixed term with no excuse. In another hand, liberal view will argue that statement. The judgment does not humanize the crime-doer if the judge renounces the law without seeing of any right voice from the man-suspected crime.
A strict judgment that is conducted by the judge may enforce the law and perhaps successfully minimize the violence. A traditional law, deliberating a man's vital organ to generate, was reported successfully reducing child-sexual abuse, in the late of 1670 in a deep tribe of Africa. Unfortunately, when the conventional punishment, the prison, firstly had been launched by the government by the end of world war II, the committed person to child abuse 90% could release from the plague. That phenomenon could happen due to the judge have to hear from witness, and witness somehow can be paid by a criminal.
Beside the conventional-punishment regulation has a flaw, the modern punishment may be justified due to its enforcement with the human right. Every human being has the right to live and to be justified equally without any tendency right or wrong, black or white. Therefore, the modern juridical law regulates a custody decision with two vital data, some witnesses and bunch of proofs.In so forth, the conventional judges do not see the suspected man is guilty before the law is said so or before the evidence and witness confirm it.
The traditional and the conventional law may take role part to decide the wrong and the right person. However, our updated punishment now, the prison, have to be straightened clearly due to not all prisoners have already become a straight person after in jail. Surprisingly, they become much more mature criminal after in cage. Above all, whatever humans' law on punishment, fixed or unfixed, could not punish a sinner fair enough only the God's judgment does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03939393939 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96490801248 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0149551144 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153102896659 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052072255532 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405726596558 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942501310773 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443678578038 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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