Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that volunteering should be made as a part of school curriculum for high school pupils. This essay totally agrees with the suggestion as it will provide children lots of valuable skill and gain higher work experience.
Education is not only included academic pursuits but also about helping pupils to raise their life skills such as teamwork, self-discipline or empathy and doing volunteer is a way to help them hone those easily. For example, when children have a task about improving their neighborhood, they ought to work as a team, learn ways to communicate effectively to each other and organize plans. The students who spend gap years joining volunteers charity before entering to college as a typical example. Thus, this will help kids to hone all the needed skills to prepare for entering to the independent lives.
Many companies and universities are looking for the type of people who posses those valuable experiences since owning them is a way for the employers to identify you out of thousands applications having the same grade as you and it's also shows that you have abundance ability to study and working with them. For instance, Harvard receive tons of applications from straight A-student, and they just select an extremely negligible number of them. Consequently, having as numerous accomplishment as possible will make you special.
In conclusion, students at the age of 15-18 should take part in unpaid community service inasmuch as it will provide kids more soft dexterity beside those theories and increasing their future employability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14229249012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86449753416 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7982035687 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226352748168 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081633898063 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704762593372 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167779829701 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199958005873 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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