Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People are indifferent views about the role of history. Whereas it is argued that it is impossible to learn some useful things for our life through learning past, others believe that history has a great deal of knowledge that plays a significant role in our life. In my opinion, history was considered an important subject in the past and I believe that it maintains its role
On the one hand, through learning history, people can find a lot of useful information which can be essential solutions for problems we are facing such as natural disasters especially droughts, and global warming. For instance, this type of data was recorded in several places and some places such as the Western world succeed to prevent forthcoming disasters. By analyzing what things caused these problems, an appropriate solution can be found in order to save the world. History experienced several different wars and most people aware of the terrible consequences of them. In my opinion, by finding which aspect plays an integral role in the beginning of the wars, we can protect our current globe from them. Finally, the autobiography of people is also considered a history, so great people's life has a good source of guidance for life and wisdom. We can learn about mistakes they made and how they tackled and found a way. By learning from mistakes, we try to not make them in the future when we face them. In addition, we know which way is better in order to solve them when we are in the same situation. For instance, Elon Musk, the richest person in the world said that he read autobiographies in order to spend his leisure time.
On the other hand, it is somewhat true that we cannot learn many things through studying history as the probability of happening the same situation happening in the past is really low. As an ancient proverb: "It is impossible to dive into the same ocean twice", we cannot repeat history. The past was different, the Earth has experienced radical changes last 50 years. In order to solve the problems, we have to go back to the past which is unimaginable things for our current situation. Hence, finding a solution to problems through only learning the past is not useful, sometimes we should find clues from our surroundings.
In conclusion,although history is not always helpful,I believe that learning the past is quite important for everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, really, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87901234568 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74595655405 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491358024691 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9041415333 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.777777778 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295446181609 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09203400159 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713907671882 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203836460028 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053703805311 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.