Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that due to the use of computers, people will no longer need to visit public museums and art galleries to see objects and pieces of art relating to history. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this view.
Visiting a museum or gallery in person provides a unique and immersive experience that cannot be replicated by viewing images on a piece of technology. In other words, seeing an artwork or artifact in person allows viewers to appreciate its scale, texture, and materiality, as well as its historical and cultural context. In doing this, the audiences may learn some meaningful lessons. For example, a visit to Con Dao prison helps visitors better understand the hardships and crimes of war caused to the Vietnamese people, from which they will appreciate the peace they have today.
Furthermore, museums and galleries serve an important role in preserving and protecting cultural heritage. Without public institutions to collect, preserve, and display historical objects and works of art, there is a risk that these objects could be lost or destroyed over time. Therefore, by collecting and housing these artifacts in a controlled environment, institutions can protect them from this risk. They can also ensure that the objects are properly cared for and maintained, which can help extend their lifespan and prevent them from deteriorating over time.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that going to public museums and art galleries provides people with individual experiences and preserves cultural assets for future generations in a way that a computer cannot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions in a way that a computer cannot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87183932177 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8492367789 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348025340151 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114085158974 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129170104935 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216954832734 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126131228572 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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