Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this?
It is widely known that the issue in terms of unhealthy foods in western countries has become a concern today. This inevitably give to the worse eating habits, and scientist recommends those people for altering their diets. I agree with these views and some reasons will be elaborated more in this essay.
First of all, Western countries, which are well-known as countries with overwhelming economy meaning higher productivity among the people, design working models for workers to spend less time in consuming food than do their tasks and deadlines. As a result, food industries invent fast food which has inevitable bad effects. Another reason is that such unhealthy foods has massively been produced and prioritized. Instead of providing nutrients and vitamins, such foods contain the excessive fat and sugar which is inconsiderable to encourage society becoming healthier because unhealthy substances containing induce the health problems. Some researches have revealed that many children in Western countries loving the junk foods such as pizza and hamburgers should suffer from obesity.
So essential is to change they eating habits that it can possibly enhance their quality of life. Even though they depend on the advance of technology for producing the most products, I believe that they are able to generate foods massively with higher nutrients and less-harmful substances. This is as long as their production keep focus on people’s health.
In conclusion, bad diet in the western countries can be caused by junk foods representing the major foods and producing unhealthy foods by selecting less precise raw materials of foods in industrialization. Moreover, I consider that creating the alteration in terms of people eating behaviour should be considered for improving the quality of life people in such places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...is to change they eating habits that it can possibly enhance their quality of life. Even tho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43859649123 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84586279658 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3651026479 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.230769231 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235363878514 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883902027246 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598821363665 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155711610491 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523814612244 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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