Some people fail in school but end up being successful in life.
Why do you think this is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
This is a fact that working hard is a key to be successful. It is thought by a few people that the students failed in school are most likely to get success in their life.The reasons and important factors would be covered in this essay.
Admittedly, Getting in school is the starting point when a children begin to learn and make new relationships with other children in school that teaches them how to be in discipline and everyone is equal in level during schooling. As the children grow up then they come to know about various things and start to understand their obligations; however, some students are weaker while other are most intelligent counterparts. First of all, Despite of being brilliant in studies, some students end up being unsuccessful in lives as getting highest grades in school examination can not measure the success in life and there are other aspects that assist to be succeed. Therefore, Attention should not be focused merely on academic studies and higher scores in the class but also participate in extra curriculum activities.
The another big reason is that a majority of students get higher grades but have lack of confidence, motivation and positivity that is most significant in getting success in life.
Finally, school is the place where the hidden talents of students get highlighted if they would be confident enough then they can be successful even they are not much good at studies. Hence, Children who are good at painting, excellent sports players, good at acting might pursue these skills as a profession and can be more successful in their life. In addition to this, In today’s modern society most employment opportunities are provided to ideal candidates who has practical knowledge and not on the basis of certificates and degrees.
To conclude, Although children work hard to achieve highest marks than other students yet they would not be successful if they are not self- motivated and confident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02777777778 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77275780966 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2228641067 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.090909091 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285963072139 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110429001871 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847132710177 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158793426721 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883134437639 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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