Some people feel that the exploration of space justifies a large amount of government and private investment. Other people think that this field is of increasingly low relevance, and should not be a priority.
Debate both sides of this discussion, and explain your own view. How important is it for us to explore space at the moment?
The question if funding space exploration is justifiable is a matter of controversy. While knowing the world around us is exciting, in my view financing the luxurious projects of space investigation is not acceptable.
Since human being has always been curious about the surrounding world, huge amount of time and money have been consumed in this regard to satiate the desire. Besides some findings like effects of lunar rotation on tidal movement, lunar and solar eclipses have been useful in humans lives. For instance, development of calendar to record time, ocean navigation. Furthermore, the research in this field has helped in advancement of technologies leading to better prediction of weather forecasting as an example.
By contrast, none of the above mentioned benefits are as useful as various kinds of public services. As taxation is the main source of government income, the wealth should be allocated fairly to benefit all people nor solely to minority of elite. Most normal people may support public investments such as more advanced hospitals, public schools and safer roads at their disposal than NASA space programs thought they might get excited hearing the magnificent discoveries. Secondly, training and education scientist for space research requires insurmountable amount of money which could be allocated for training doctors, better payment for teachers and cancer research.
In conclusion, although space exploration may offer a sense of achievement to some extent, regarding a great deal of financial and human resources, I believe it would be wrong to deprive a majority of people from a quality life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether funding space exploration is justifiabl...
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Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...utile besides the risk of human live as is was seen in space mission disaster in 2...
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...le besides the risk of human live as is was seen in space mission disaster in 2013....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21724137931 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79148739967 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651724137931 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7658468552 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198654643337 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706697389377 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03726986411 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111887058472 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216537508696 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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