Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are reasons for these behaviors? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
It is widely argued that buying things which are unecessary and unaffordable can make people to be deep in debt. Although there are numerous reasons behind this phenomenon, some several solution could be adopted to solve the problem.
To begin with, these behaviors can be attributable to two principal factors. Firstly, one of the most obvious problem is consumptive lifestyles of people caused by effects of their parents when they were children. In other words, parents often overindulge their children by buying for them everything which they are keen on. Therefore, when children become mature, they will tend to show off their financial status by purchasing state of art gadgets or luxurious goods. Secondly, another worrying trend is the development of credit cards. For example, credit cards could lend for people a great amount of money that helps them own expensive things which are greater than their income, so lends cannot control their habits and get into debt easier.
However, it is not impossible to tackle such problem as there are promising solutions that society can make use of. First of all, the measure which should be taken in order to deal with these behaviors is creation of alternative entertainment beside shopping. To be more specific, individuals must have options for their leisure instead of going to shopping centers such as playing sports, listening to music, or travelling. In addition, one way to eradicate this issue is the strict control of banks. It means that the limitation of money for lenders have to be reduced to suit with their income. Moreover, government and banks should have rigid punishments for people who do not pay in required time.
In conclusion, there is a growing concern that debt is more popular when people purchase needless and expensive objects which leads to the various negative consequences, but these issues could be resolved by some above mesures
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...us reasons behind this phenomenon, some several solution could be adopted to solve the problem. ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ossible to tackle such problem as there are promising solutions that society can make use of....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15335463259 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60149054673 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61661341853 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1933127168 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288113016645 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891381300501 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539702077925 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176418925107 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050689196741 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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