Some people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?
It is true that some highly accomplished staffs with academic qualifications and practical skills in their major are liable to go abroad for a career. This essay will demonstrate some triggers and adversities engendered by this phenomenon.
Many support the view that highly talented professionals aspire to work overseas for two main reasons. Firstly, in many enhancing countries, the authorities do not have sufficient powers and recognitions for their contribution. Only by getting an international work exposure, can people live with a satisfactory salary and promotion opportunities. For instance, Vietnamese government remunerates for doctors who are in the highest place of the hierarchy is ten times lower than in America. Only when transform to a more developing nations can they have a high living standard in order to subsidize their family. Furthermore, many people migrate to other countries for career because of a creative and professional working environment. Should we have an invigorating workplace, working efficiency will be advanced.
On the contrary, one of the two main adverse effects caused by this phenomenon of brain drain is that it deprives the local population of first-rate services in the area specialize in science and technology. This correlated to such an exodus of much of intellectual employees creates a serious labour shortage in their country. For example, the number of doctors available in India per million people is a dismal 500, whereas, in the USA there are 2300 doctors to cater to a population of a million. Moreover, the vanishing of veterans will diminish the intellectual standard of the society because young generation is contingent on the knowledge and experience that their older generations propagate.
In conclusion, many people who adept at working choose to alter another country for better work opportunities and quality of life. However, this trend causes any matters such as brain drain and the alleviation of intellectual standard for the host country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44585987261 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13293740228 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4654135117 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184529749669 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605624977905 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330638198474 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116955010644 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293151632085 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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