some people prefer to allow their children watching TV any time, others think that it is better to limit the time of watching TV
discuss both sides and give your opinion
In modern times, the most concern the parents have is children's health. So, how we can protect our children from modern device`s risks such as television? While some parents see that we should limit the hours children spend in front of screen, others say that letting the children watch television as many hours as they like. In this essay I will discuss both sides and provide my own perspective.
Although the benefits from limiting the hours by children watch television, there are many risks. First , according to a new study, those how used to spend more one hour watched television scored low marks in elementary school as well as in high school. Second, the mental risks, as an example one child in our neighborhood who is addicted by watching television he has a lot of mental problems even he could not speak correctly. Hence, no one can argue the negative things from being the child addicted by watching television.
On the other hand, some experts and researchers found out that there are no risks as much as common people think. The idea is that when we limit the hours we limit our children desires so our children become less creative. Furthermore, the TV provides many beneficial programs such as sports and religious programs. So, some experts recommend that parents should not limit children desires including watching television.
Personally, we have to give children full freedom to choose what they want. And parents should observe which they watch so that avoiding the risks as well as grow healthy children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, second, so, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01937984496 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54632546008 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1247641501 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230461643136 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821911446608 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426960880596 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140563673006 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043878297889 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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