Some people prefer to live in a countryside , but other people like to live in a city.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In modern times, living in a place where you can adapt with easily has become increasingly controversial. Some people think that living in a small place as well as countryside where you know everyone is more convenient. While others believe that living in a vast place is the optimum choice. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why people prefer to live in the countryside. Perhaps the main reason is because the countryside has a small space, unlike the city which everyone can know each other and help each other. Furthermore, noises in a small area are less than huge ones. Also, the air is clean and healthy because natural trees and vast fields which you can breathe healthily. For example, the latest statistics indicate that ninety per cent of rural people do not suffer from asthma, in contrast to people who live in cities.
On the other hand, vast majority of people believe that living in a crowd places like cities is more comfortable because public services, such as electricity, water and medicine are available better than villages. Moreover, job chances are abundant which means that you can obtain work easily, therefore you can earn money and live the life.
In conclusion, living whether in a city or countryside is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. I tend to believe that living in cities is easier and more comfortable because cities have a good schools, markets and hospitals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, you know, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8897338403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53538334149 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2901624161 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34322232794 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117682119484 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755731661586 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20231821875 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557661981595 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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