Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding
change.Others, however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Change is constant in every human life, no human has ever remain stagnant in life. But some people prefer to spent their live doing the same thing and avoiding changes. Although, other believe that change is always a good thing . this essay will examine both view before reaching concrete decision.
In the first place,when people are comfortable with the ways they perform their daily routine , change may not be necessary to them because they have adapt to that pattern of living. For instance, a geriatric may not be able to make use of new technology such as tablet computer to read newspapers because his comfortable with the conventional way of reading from print media. Therefore, adapting to this new trend will come as a challenge and to avoid such , he will prefer to remain the same way.
In constrast, for some one to be succeful in life he or she have to to venture into different style and strategize the way he/she do things. For example, a business man who experienced failure in his bussiness have to opt for a new method of making the bussiness succesful one. I n addition, change has always come with various challenges , an employee whom is promoted to a new level or rank can not be doing things as it is before. He has to develop and strategize a new trend cope with the new challenge.
In conclusion, for you to be succesful in life you have to embrace a change of doing things so that you can know the best in you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in the first place, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55212355212 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52088674006 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6128803604 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192816838766 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874517923309 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105585622053 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131370615464 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109871158062 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.