Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both sides these views and give your own opinion
It is an incontrovertible fact that change is the nature of law. Few masses like to do beautiful things in life. While, others are avoid challenges and always prefer to same things. This essay examines the both view-point and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are some reasons why the change is always a good think the first is that some people have ability to adapt the fast transforming either, it is in themselves or environment. As well as, couple of people have a tendency to always find a new challenge in their life. They want to experience with finding new friends. They feel more enthusiasm to do many things than doing the same things. Moreover, some people have economic reason why they must change their activities. For example, if a company-worker want to entrepreneur they must travel to find new places and to acquire new skills. When they meet new relatives, they might be more creative to develop their own business.
The other hand, other lobby feel more comfortable with working in the same setting because, they do not want take risk. To instance, a person who work in a same company many years, they would not change the job because, they would not sure about this job and it can affected the salary of the person. Secondly, the aging masses are not like to transformation in their life because they become perfect to doing same thing with zero defects and are already did many changes in their life.
In my opinion, changes are very important for everyone because, it hard to learn new things. However, is not compulsory for everyone.
In conclusion, each coin has two sides if the changes has some positive points it also has negative one. But, its depend on person to person transmute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'comfortable working'.
Suggestion: comfortable working
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
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Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'negatived'.
Suggestion: negatived
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80198019802 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55933731579 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4171903023 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255957448654 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793079343507 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549158889415 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131526266954 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625088760801 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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