Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion do the drawbacks of video games outweigh benefits.
During technologies developed, a couple of people think that playing video games is a good way to spend their time interestingly. They even believe that video games are beneficial for study of people. However, it is also trusted that computer games are harmful. Personally, I consider that merits is much more than demerits.
First of all, there are few drawbacks of video games. Nevertheless, none of them impacts on people quite severely. One of the most considerable disadvantages is wasting time. Because, a variety of computer games are being merchandised now. Most of them attract people. As a result, person who plays this kind of games may be quite keen on video games. In consequence, they might expend own full day only to play games and they may not pay attention other things, even their family as well. Whilst this conduce to bad results. For example, if anybody plays computer games a lot, he or she may be used to doing this activity regularly. Whereas it badly effects on people's life.
However, several advantages are available of playing video games and they can outweigh disadvantages. Firstly, people can spend their time enjoyably on this activity. For instance, if children are bored, they can play this sort of games. Presently, adults even enjoy this activity. As, video games are incredible indeed. Apart from that, many computer games are available that are related to education. These are useful for everyone. Definitely, there are other benefits playing video games, but, abovementioned statements are more significant.
In conclusion, although video games have some disadvantages they are invisible because of a mjority of advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1970260223 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8078409227 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9248127782 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7826086957 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6956521739 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.60869565217 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398447038981 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111454310771 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834633228373 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26038237481 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341648026681 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.