Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
In the present time, playing video games on a laptop or mobile phone has become increasingly common. So as the fact that, game market has become extremely developing. Some people believe that playing video games may have negative effect on players, others believe that it is completely harmless. Playing game also have its benefits and drawbacks. From my perspective, the disadvangtages of playing video game can outweight the advantages. This essay below will partly dicuss and explain the reasons for my points of view.
On the one hand, the major purpose of games was to amuse players. Therefore, playing games has a variety of benefits. The easiest thing to recognize is how games bring together gamers from various locations all over the world. Due to the fact that players can communicate with each other through the games they play. It means playing games is one of the most excellent way to bring people together. For example, “Arena of valor” the teamgame quite popular nowadays. In my onpinion, that game would be the best game for each individual want to make friend online through some game battles.
On the other hand, I tend to gravitate towards the idea that playing game will bring adverse effect to players, especially are players have played long time before. People play video games may result in addiction. Due to the fact that people who become addicted to video games may spend their all day playing them. It means that gamers will have a bad health and weak body because of their addiction. To avoid game addiction, players need to play scientifically. That means many individuals who want to play game after the work in order to entertain must have a reasonable game time. Another disadvantage is that when playing teamgames, some angry individuals frequently send crazy messages to other players. People should think before playing a game.
In conclusion, game is mainly created to make players entertain and amuse. If people play with friends, they can have some happy moments. Howerver, in reality, there a numerous of players become addicted when playing video game. So as the fact that, I totally believe that the negative side is outweight the posititive side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01092896175 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51767320596 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505464480874 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0966939703 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.36 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.64 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445228819135 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151438880738 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103112924466 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309860179427 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776525752229 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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