Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your opinion
It is true that in todays modern world, people are persuaded to purchase more things by advertising. However, some people think that advertising is no longer paid attention. In my opinion, advertising should be considered the main factor manipulating people to spend more money on buying items.
In the one hand, advertisements are regarded that transfer the wrong information about the products. First of all, there are a large number of platforms and social networking sites in which advertisement are added to endorse some particular products. It is the fact that they interrupt the programs or work that exerts negative effects on our attention. Take advertisements in youtube as an example. There have been many times when I am disturbed by some video promoting clothes or some pairs of shoes. In addition, some advertisements are promoting the products that violate the intellectual properties. The products that have the same labels or brand without being justified have been appeared in a large number of advertisements can lead to misunderstand and some complaints of customers.
On the other hand, I believe that advertising is worth mentioning as an effective way to encourage people to expand their expenditure. Firstly, advertising can do wonders for showcasing the right usages and instruction of products with a variety of helpful appliances in our daily life. This makes us feel missed out if we don’t own any of them. For instance, Apple is the brand which is successful in advertising their Iphones. By uploading video introducing the reliable innovative and upgraded functions, customers, especially youngers, are more likely to be attracted and then try to attain this item. Moreover, there are a lot of celebrities who endorse the products in ads that can increase the reliability of them. More and more sponsor contracts and endorsing deals are signed recently. This is why people are immersing in buying things more in comparison to the past.
In conclusion, there are convincing reasons both for and against the presence of advertising nowadays. However, I believe that advertising is the main reason why people spend more money on purchasing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03194964586 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548850574713 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8988509565 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.35 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285930182049 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873147343595 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726311538696 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184999156823 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782147759694 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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