Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people argue that the Advertisement bring huge contributions on encouraging people to buy a stuff. Then, others believe that Advertisement is now too common and not many people aware to this anymore. However, both views have strong bases. Therefore, this essay will discuss about these strong sides.
On the one side, we could not deny that many huge companies could reach a lot of customers through advertisement from any social media such as Youtube. Facebook, Instagram and Even twitter. It is because this kind of media are used by a lor of range different ages of people. Moreover, by facing by a lot of products on advertisement, realize or nor, people has influenced to interest on the product that is shown. Then, this will lead to a desire to buy the product. Therefore, Advertising still become a useful tool to attract costumer attention.
On the other hand, many believe that an Advertising no longer could persuade people to buy things, since it is too common. Moreover, there are a lot of unique mode of advertisement from competitor which do the same way. Therefore, this kind of way is no longer succeed to push people buying the product. Another one is quality of the product which not as good as it shown on the advertisement. This condition makes people become untrust with the product. Therefore, even the commercial is made with good quality, people is not attracted anymore.
In conclusion, those both of views give strong argument. However, i personally believe that event somehow advertisement which is shown on the Billboard or social media have not good in quality, they still make a big impact for people to buy the products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93950177936 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77993578306 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519572953737 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0520109389 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1111111111 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269929607141 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862726355534 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731244806516 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177979450448 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664084527376 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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