Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that providing sport facilities is the best solution to the problem of taking care for the health of community. However, others make an argument on the efficiency of this solution.
People supporting this view assume that in modern life, we tend to ignore our health due to a busy lifestyle. Therefore, local sport centers which are easy to get to will be more convenient for one who are busy. This would create a habit of people to do exercise more regularly, which is required in order to keep fit and stay healthy.
One the other hand, there some opinions against this. Some people suppose not everyone is interested in sports, as most people who come to sport clubs are sport lovers, not the ones who need them. As a result, building sport facilities which costs lots of money will make no sense at all. Thus, other solutions should be considered.
In my opinion, although it is important to build sport centres, we should not focus on it only. In addition, governments need to provide everyone with knowledge and raise awareness of human health. Moreover, fatty or sugary food such as fast food, junk food should be restricted or imported with high taxes for the aim of a healthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71361502347 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45202597782 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1772486492 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169405760233 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632046789136 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401434929842 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105616525732 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427887952508 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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