Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recent years have seen that children who are overscheduled in studying need more extra activities for their time outside of school. Some people believe that children should strongly know what they should do in their leisure time. However, others think that parents can organize effective ways for their children in this time.
People who argue that the young generation can make decisions what they want to do in their free time helps them naturally grow up and have independently target in the future. For example, kids who are passionate about football and are free to play it in free time may make sure they want to be soccer players. As a result, children would continuously explore themselves and find out their best abilities. In addition, children exactly know their hobbies to choose how to spend their time. This can help them release the stress of schoolwork and enjoy their childhood.
In contrast, one main benefit of parents selecting their children's activities is that they have long-term experience and matunity can make well-positioned decisions. For instance, famous singers can guide their kids ways to develop in music by selecting better music class. Consequently, children are well-orientated for jobs in the future. Another advantages is that parents can see their kid's strengths and weaknesses to choose suitable activities. This leads to young people not only enhance their inborn talents but also improve their disadvantages. For example, parents may enroll in outside activities for children who have physical health problems to help them increase resistance.
In summary, although parents might set structured guidelines, children should be give opportunities to follow their interests. In my opinion, parents should give advice helps children make their choices and develop their potential personal passions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
Recent years have seen that children who are overscheduled in studying need more ext...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'targeted'.
Suggestion: targeted
...aturally grow up and have independently target in the future. For example, kids who ar...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... jobs in the future. Another advantages is that parents can see their kids strengt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41114982578 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74864089502 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9889526372 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421456253534 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144958948616 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869614230677 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276977880134 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767255122884 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.