Some people say that government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In parallel to advancement in technological apparatus and hiking popularity of television programs, the number of violent scenes is on the elevation in this jet age of 21st century. Therefore, some masses are of the opinion that regime should outlaw such sort of television shows in order to keep into consideration its jeopardy effects. Here, I would like to Accord with the given statement firmly.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to sport my point of view. First and foremost, films have tremendous effects on the attitude of civilians. To elucidate, in movie Dhoom 2 , actor Hritik Roshan steel pricy objects with the assistance of modern gizmos which stimulate people to imitate these type of acts in their real life. Moreover, nowadays, film and television programs are comprise vulgarity and sconces related to sexual harassment. Therefore, issues related to torturing, rapes and pedophiles catch fire in this contemporary apoch. As a result, people are more likely to become the victim of bad habits on account of broadcasting of such programs.
To commence with, it is apparent to seen murder, physical harassment and human trafficking in television shows or movies which allow people to do nasty acts in their real life. Adding to it, television programs depicts the characters abusing after drinking alcohol, fighting with goons, stealing money from bank which incite people to perform such kind of activities in their personal life. Thence, it is the need an hour to put restrictions on violent scenes.
To recapitulate, undeniably, the broadcasters depict such type of programs for mere amusement of folks. Howeve, I still believe that liable measures should be taken by higher authorities in order to set the foundation of peaceful world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, kind of, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24028268551 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83994753885 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65371024735 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2810648649 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174220335394 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505574055469 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030257308418 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962583876302 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041075932588 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.