Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a
clean environment. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals contend that economic development usually connects with a favorable environment while others argue that a development of the economy deteriorates the habitat of numerous species. From my perspective, I completely agree with the latter idea.
On the one hand, it has been known that economic development can contribute to the conservation of the environment. As the financial wealthy of a country rises substantially, it attains a considerable number of money which enables the government to take actions on dealing with environmental issues. The government, for example, is able to allocate resources into building a high advanced waste system which removes toxic wastes dumped directly to the environment. Furthermore, when a nation successfully gains a stable economic progression, the authorities will then have more time to tackle environment problems, and therefore it both achieves financial and environmental goals.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that some countries with successful economic achievements struggle to overcome the degradation of the environment. One reason for this issue is that the council and national governments neglect to preserve the environment while focusing on boosting the economy. Due to the high demand for enhancing the financial development, political leaders fail to set their sight on protecting the environment from detrimental pollutions. Lacking of policy detering carbon dioxide emissions from factories and personal transports will pose a threat to the environment. As a result, citizens being native to that nation have to breathe in a contaminated atmosphere which causes devastating diseases such as tuberculosis and bronchitis.
In conclusion, although developing the economy has an integral part in elevating the living standard, the government should pay more attention to balance both economic development and environmental conservation in order to satisfy inhabitants’s requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86458333333 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39384989508 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6731588135 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.75 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190973472948 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636607259413 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489502907152 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105986380849 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339033891996 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.