Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best
route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job
straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals say that accessibility to tertiary education is a decent choice to ensure a job after graduating while others argue that joining the workforce as soon as finishing high schools is a great decision. From a personal perspective, I totally disagree with the latter idea.
On the one hand, leaving school tends to allow people to reap several benefits. It is said that vocational trainings have increasingly become ubiquitous these day with provision of a wide range of different professions. School-leavers, therefore, are able to take these courses after finishing studying at educational institutions, and this will help them alleviate the burden of living expenses and take care of their families. If they are unable to continue pursuing higher education, getting a job has an integral part in their lives.
On the other hand, entry to university or college seems to be an inevitable method to ensure a future job. After achieving a diploma from prestigious institutions, an individual will be provided with profound knowledge that plays a vital role in the job performance. All the experience and soft skills gained while being in university will enhance the job opportunities as well as job security for undergraduates whereas school dropouts are hardly proficient to take responsibilities relating to professional tasks. Furthermore, being a university student allow a person to expand their relationships with competent companions and partners who have a tendency to provide assistance for them in the near future.
In conclusion, although quiting studying will benefit a human in an early stage, finishing nearly 4 years at university has been shown a popular choice for the majority due to its beneficial advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ngs have increasingly become ubiquitous these day with provision of a wide range of diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39051094891 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18953255308 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7478130959 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.272727273 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139669841423 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500477383093 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362766988991 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826078355134 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130162592461 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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