There is the statement that the most critical dilemma in the present is the extinction of individual species of creatures. However, others agree that there are more pressing issues that need to be addressed. In this essay, both views will be discussed.
It is needless to say that the disappearance of several rare species is one of the top alarming problems. Increasing animal deaths are caused by a lack of necessities like foods, water, a healthy habitat and the list goes on. Moreover, when the population of a species becomes too small, the natural reproduction is not enough to sustain it. Therefore, numerous species are driven to the verge of extinction, leading to multiple significant consequences. Many kinds of plants with medical values will be lost. More importantly, in countries like Vietnam, annual floods are becoming more and more severe due to the loss of forests and soil erosion, resulting in thousands of tragic deaths a year.
On the other hand, there are other alarming issues that can lead to catastrophic aftermaths. Firstly, overpopulation is a problem that should not be overlooked. Specifically, the substantial rise in population leads to series of issues such as lack of food, education, accommodations, employment, and the list goes on. The next problem is the greenhouse effect, which directly influences Earth and the environment. Take ozone layer depletion for example. The ozone layer is gradually getting thinner and the sunlight can harm human health. In addition, the growth of Earth’s average temperatures, sea levels and extreme weather conditions are threatening the existence of humankind.
To recapitulate briefly, the extinction of several rare species is alarming, and it has to be tackled as fast as we can. However, there are numerous problems that should never be underestimated.
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages schools should not force them to learn foreign languages To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this To what extend do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30479452055 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06029321133 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5900975271 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0555555556 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166792506084 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450401154494 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363805371669 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878276782093 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184392895101 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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