Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
People have different ideas about the effect of music on our lives. In my opinion, I partly agree with the view that music is a great way to reduce the distance between people no matter which cultures they are from, but it contributes to widening the gap between different generations.
Music is regarded as a bridge for people from different cultures since it is the universal language around the world. It expresses human emotions, such as joy, love, or sorrow. Although people do not need interpretation or translation, people can still greatly enjoy it. The reason is that the melody and rhythm of music can touch their heart and soul. Some songs of the girl group Blackpink, for example, have gone viral all over the world. Millions of their fans from different countries have listened to and shared their opinion about these songs on a daily basis. Therefore, I think music helps reduce the differences between different cultures.
However, I believe that music enlarges the differences between generations. While adults love traditional music, which has a gentle rhythm and meaningful and thorough lyrics, the young prefer modern music with a catchy tune, such as Rap or electronic one. Some older people find the contemporary one difficult to try. In contrast, the youth may assume that the traditional one is boring. For example, in my family, my father often complains to me about listening to K-pop songs.
In conclusion, I support the opinion that music can play an important role in connecting people from different backgrounds, but it can broaden the distance between different generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09848484848 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70014921534 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1043310593 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279892861111 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929451125046 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705109512863 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184105953521 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587307154857 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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