Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about whether we should tolerate unfavorable conditions such as a job or financial crisis or not. While some argue that it could be better to do that, I personally believe that the better solution for such cases is making every effort to overcome them.
On the one hand, some assume that we should accept bad situations for some reasons. Firstly, they may argue that there are no other options for them to choose. Because of the adverse life, they need to make a living to survive, they are willing to keep going on the old path. Some university graduates in my country, for example, struggle to search for jobs related to their major, but they fail. Thus, they end up applying for irrelevant positions. Another reason is that some people find it is too risky to change. If they try something new, they could fail. As a result, they accept those situations to hold a sense of security.
On the other hand, I would argue that trying to improve unfavorable situations will be better than accepting. The reason is that it helps people overcome difficulties and leads them to new success. When they can achieve their goal, they may inspire lots of other people, then receive the respect from them. In contrast, if they keep on accepting such conditions, they cannot move forward. Nguyen Ngoc Ky is a case in point, his hand has lost its function since he was four years old, yet he still practiced writing and went to school like normal children. After continuous efforts, he became an excellent teacher and was given several national awards.
In conclusion, although for some, it is acceptable to put up with bad situations, in my opinion, I believe that it is important to try their best and improve such conditions to open new horizons for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to open new horizons for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75562700965 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48352685217 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7557571192 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248741994039 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795458244365 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704730151392 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166860048975 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400158504474 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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