Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A group of people believe that when bringing people of different ages and varied cultures together, music can be really helpful. I will be discussing this idea and giving my own opinion with the following paragraphs.
It is a known fact that music has different types and they mostly depend on the traditions of a country. Where I live, for instance, has many tourists who usually come to visit when it's summertime. When the locals hang out with them, they share their music cultures mutually. This kind of communication eventually helps both sides to develop a more comprehensive perspective on the daily lives of each other.
In addition to that, music also helps people connect with others from different age groups. For example, an adult who enjoys listening to jazz music may have a joyful conversation with a teenager who share the same feelings. On the other hand, it also contributes to the relationship between strangers who do not like the same types of music, by supporting them to share their own ideas and discover new ones. Therefore, music might be exteremely efficient clustering people who are different.
To conclude, music is a tool with no war and it's equal for all. I can say that I completely agree with the idea that defends music as it is a good way to bring people who do not share the same cultures and ages together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ists who usually come to visit when its summertime. When the locals hang out with them, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76495726496 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65223535904 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.344152826 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9166666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271063393624 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107117799153 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1252702945 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187713987999 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942443656102 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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