Some people say that music is a good way of ringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is very often said that music inspires people around the world. Some people think that music unites people regardless their culture and age group. I completely agree that music makes union between nations.
Firstly, a famous music around our planet has no language so it might supplant barriers between people and enjoy all classes of people. In other words, in general, music thrive inside societies when it towards the soul of public because as a people have the same feeling and music touch that thing. Furthermore, listening to music encourage different person to meet together and understand each other so music might unite states. Many studies have shown the fascinating of music has a massive effect on reducing problem between people as well as nations. As a result, music has positive impact on listeners and might help in alleviating a challenge that faces a human.
Another reason to consider is music has glamour effect on integration of employees or students. Moreover, when employees listen to music in their workplace, this might encourage motivation to compete and improve productivity. In addition, listening to music in schools instill passion between student to work within groups and produce creative ideas. For instance, a study has been conducted in Germany showed that 70% of voters agree that music makes related communities. As consequently, music nurtures a creativity and enthusiasm in societies.
to sum up, in spite of other factors in grouping people, music plays a significant role in solving problems and gathering people to each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in general, as a result, as well as, in other words, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23320158103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65300140835 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1222847875 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219278736811 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855134590861 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653914550755 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149428004892 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827704877807 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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